Wednesday, November 18, 2015

PROPOSAL

PROPOSAL REGARDING THE STUDENT LIBRARY IMPROVEMENTS
FAO: Head of School
Introduction
Many years after its last refurbishment, our student library is about to be improved. I would like to put forward some suggestions in order to make affordable improvements, taking into account that a small Budget is available.

Lighting
Our library lacks sunlight since it is located on the ground floor. The library users have been complaining for years about the lighting, not only because it is an old and unaesthetic system, but also due to the inefficiency of the lamps.
I would strongly suggest adapting the lighting system to the modern times, which necessarily implies acquiring LED lamps. I feel sure that the initial expenses this improvement may cause will be worthy, because this type of lighting will reduce our energy consumption, will provide much better light quality and the library will look more attractive.

Refreshment facilities
Some students think our refreshment vending machine is old and offers little variety of snacks and drinks. I believe it is in good working order, though an additional refreshment service would satisfy everybody. As an affordable suggestion, I would recommend inviting a Charity to provide afternoon refreshment recipes. This could be considered an opportunity of non-monetary swapping, since we offer them the benefits of a service to fund their projects and they give us the service we need.

Conclusion
It is my firm believe that it is possible to improve the student library for little expense. By changing the lighting system, we may obtain a short and long-term benefit, both for us and the environment. On the other hand, we could solve the refreshment problem through the cooperation with a Charity.


(By A. F- C1 level)

Monday, November 16, 2015

PROPOSAL SAMPLE BY A C1 STUDENT

PROPOSAL TO IMPROVE THE STUDENT LIBRARY
To the Head of Valladolid Language School                     

INTRODUCTION
The student library is an important part of the Language School. It is a place where students can give their language learning process a boost. The aim of this proposal, therefore, is to improve the resources and facilities by using a small budget in order to carry out the following suggestions:

ELECTRICITY AND LIGHTING
I strongly believe that more sockets are needed. Nowadays, technology helps us with everything and learning a language is no exception. Smartphones and laptops are powerful tools to work with, but utterly useless if they run out of charge. Furthermore, I would like to recommend replacing the regular light bulbs with LED bulbs. This little change will save energy and money in the long term.

OUTSIDE AREAS
Many students come to the School by bicycle or motorbike carrying helmets, backpacks, bags, etc. For this reason, I think that it would be helpful if we provide them with lockers where they could keep all their personal belongings. In addition, it would also be beneficial if we install vending machines for coffee, sweets and snacks next to the lockers. In this way, students who are in a hurry or just want to take a break from books could do so.

CONCLUSION
I hope that the proposed improvements could be applied in the upcoming weeks. Money should not be a problem since these recommendations are not really that expensive and they might have a very positive impact. To summarise, these ideas would make the library a more welcoming and comfortable space for everyone.




L. G.G.

Friday, November 13, 2015

Life on other planets-video

Watch the video we saw in class once more to get a few more ideas for the "outlining" exercise.

Life On Other Planets?! Neil deGrasse Tyson Thinks It's Possible.